The coverlines used are very good, and the colour scheme contrasts nicely with the image.The use of a ouff is good as it brings another splash of colour to the page (other than navy blue and light blue). I like that you have included a price and date above the barcode, making it look conventional.
Well done Fatma!! The picture is very well thought about in terms of the mid shot and how the model is posing portraying the good college life.the cover line is very relevant. the puff isnt very good
the photography on this is bomb! she looks naturally happy, also the colour scheme works well with her skin tone, however the editing on the picture doesn't work in the genre it's for in my opinion but i love it :)
The magazine looks very personable due the model smiling and holding a folder. This allows the college students to identify with the magazine and more likely to pick it up. Colour scheme complements the photo. Very well effort.
You're Mag layout and the way you have made it is good and appealing to consumers and its also attractive with the coverlines and the gift giveway. You could have added another colour to create a 3 colour scheme.
The front cover looks very clean as a front cover as the brightness makes the cover star stand out with the bright background and the dark clothing worn by the cover star makes the cover star stand out from the background. The masthead being wrapped around the main image makes the cover star stand out. Another good thing about the image is the colours worn by the cover star are transferred over to the text colours and makes the colour scheme synonymous with the image. The cover lines are brief and precise to the information in the magazine. The skyline having to be linked with Leyton adds regulations to creativity but, you handled it to a point in which it is student friendly.
This is really good, your photography is greaaat :) one constructive criticism is maybe you could've made her LSC lanyard more visible? And also, the 10 on the far right is a bit awkwardly placed, is it supposed to be 10 outfit ideas for this season? Other than that this is hard to fault, A***************** :D
The coverlines used are very good, and the colour scheme contrasts nicely with the image.The use of a ouff is good as it brings another splash of colour to the page (other than navy blue and light blue). I like that you have included a price and date above the barcode, making it look conventional.
ReplyDeleteWell done Fatma!!
ReplyDeleteThe picture is very well thought about in terms of the mid shot and how the model is posing portraying the good college life.the cover line is very relevant. the puff isnt very good
the photography on this is bomb! she looks naturally happy, also the colour scheme works well with her skin tone, however the editing on the picture doesn't work in the genre it's for in my opinion but i love it :)
ReplyDeleteThe magazine looks very personable due the model smiling and holding a folder. This allows the college students to identify with the magazine and more likely to pick it up. Colour scheme complements the photo. Very well effort.
ReplyDeleteYou're Mag layout and the way you have made it is good and appealing to consumers and its also attractive with the coverlines and the gift giveway. You could have added another colour to create a 3 colour scheme.
ReplyDeleteThe front cover looks very clean as a front cover as the brightness makes the cover star stand out with the bright background and the dark clothing worn by the cover star makes the cover star stand out from the background. The masthead being wrapped around the main image makes the cover star stand out. Another good thing about the image is the colours worn by the cover star are transferred over to the text colours and makes the colour scheme synonymous with the image. The cover lines are brief and precise to the information in the magazine. The skyline having to be linked with Leyton adds regulations to creativity but, you handled it to a point in which it is student friendly.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good, your photography is greaaat :) one constructive criticism is maybe you could've made her LSC lanyard more visible? And also, the 10 on the far right is a bit awkwardly placed, is it supposed to be 10 outfit ideas for this season? Other than that this is hard to fault, A***************** :D
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