i really like your magazine as the colour scheme works nicely and it all comes together very well. the font that you have chosen links to the genre and it looks good. for now i cant think of anything you could change or fix because it looks very professional and actually looks like a rock magazine
I like the colour scheme of the magazine and it conveys the genre well and the images are also very good, however there is a grammatical error in the DPS as it should say 'fell into depression'. Overall it looks very professional and well done.
I like the colour scheme that you have used and that it remained the same through out the cover, contents page and DPS. The genre is clear from you design.
your front cover looks professional! I like the layout and the font of the text. The colours you have used work well together. Maybe you could add the issue date at the top of the cover.
I like the colour scheme of the front cover and the layout of the cover line is really unique. However some the text on the left is cut off so that should be adjusted.
This is really cool, your DPS looks really professional, here are my points: - I dont really like the white background on the contents and cover, in my opinion your work is really awesome then the background is quite bland? It needs something but i'm not sure what :s - On your cover just refine your aligning like on the pull quote it's more slanted than the 'Fallen Angel' so put them on the same diagonal and with the 'Emerging Bands' on the right hand side - As someone who would read an alternative magazine, your colour scheme doesn't really appeal to me, have a look at Kerrang! and RockSound, there's just a bit too much yellow on yours
Those were the only things I could fault if I was being super picky, otherwise it looks awesome :)
Oh yeah one more thing, in your DPS article be careful of hyphenated words because it's unprofessional, skim through it and put the hyphenated words onto a new line :)
i really like your magazine as the colour scheme works nicely and it all comes together very well. the font that you have chosen links to the genre and it looks good. for now i cant think of anything you could change or fix because it looks very professional and actually looks like a rock magazine
ReplyDeleteI really like your magazine colour scheme as it fits nicely with the genre.I think on a hold your magazine looks very professional.
ReplyDeleteI like the colour scheme of the magazine and it conveys the genre well and the images are also very good, however there is a grammatical error in the DPS as it should say 'fell into depression'. Overall it looks very professional and well done.
ReplyDeleteI like the colour scheme that you have used and that it remained the same through out the cover, contents page and DPS. The genre is clear from you design.
ReplyDeleteyour front cover looks professional! I like the layout and the font of the text. The colours you have used work well together. Maybe you could add the issue date at the top of the cover.
ReplyDeleteI like the colour scheme of the front cover and the layout of the cover line is really unique. However some the text on the left is cut off so that should be adjusted.
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool, your DPS looks really professional, here are my points:
ReplyDelete- I dont really like the white background on the contents and cover, in my opinion your work is really awesome then the background is quite bland? It needs something but i'm not sure what :s
- On your cover just refine your aligning like on the pull quote it's more slanted than the 'Fallen Angel' so put them on the same diagonal and with the 'Emerging Bands' on the right hand side
- As someone who would read an alternative magazine, your colour scheme doesn't really appeal to me, have a look at Kerrang! and RockSound, there's just a bit too much yellow on yours
Those were the only things I could fault if I was being super picky, otherwise it looks awesome :)
Oh yeah one more thing, in your DPS article be careful of hyphenated words because it's unprofessional, skim through it and put the hyphenated words onto a new line :)
ReplyDelete